Gone are the days of master story tellers, in Nepali literature.
Now, it seems that the nre generation has given up all hope of earning a square meal by writing. But if one were to go by ‘Sipahiki Swasni’, a short-story book by a young aspiring writer, Mahesh Bikram Shah, one can still be hopeful fo the future for Nepali stries.
There are still some young writers, who, apart from their daily busy lives, take time to contribute for the literature. The small contribution made by these youngesters will definately pave a new horizon for the future of nepali literature.
‘Sipahiki Swasni’ is the third in the series of Mahesh Bikram Shah’s publications, where the writer has chosen to portray characters from various walks of life; from Thawang village of far-western Nepal to Esat Timor. All these characters, it seems, are around us and among us. Going through all 18 stories in the book, one would be surprised at how all his characters are victims of tragedy: Either by maoists or by their masters or by their fate.
The writer is successful in vivid description of their agony, their sentiments and the relationships they share. The descriptions seem real, if not imaginative because he has a lot of regional and local input in all of his stories. The dialects have added local flavour in the writing. Since he has lived in all parts of the world, he has chosen to describe in the book, they naturally seem realistic for his first hand experience.
The author seems to have developed a close affinity to all his characters. Among the 18 stories in the book, some are excellent like Khuma, Kamaro and Sipahiki Swasni, and some are up to the mark like Santrasta Manharu. the rest are fine. Though, it is difficult to categorise them, some of the stories are exceptionally realistic in description, others in language, yet others are full of emotional sentiments like in Kamaro, he presents a life of a slave.
He is successful in making ironical comparisions between the life of a dog and that of a slave, who sleep together to keep warm in chilly winter nights. But in some of the other stories, the reader might be amazed to find a simple character like sante, in Khola, speak in a philosophical note. It seems he is not an illiterat evillager but an educated man. Shah’s sentences are rich with metaphores. Sometimes he has experimented it successfully and somewhere it looks like he has failed.
Mohan Raj Sharma, a noted Nepali literary critic writes in the preface of Sipahiki Swasni, “This book is worth mentioning for its use of language in Nepali literature and contribution in the art of Nepali story telling.” Mornign shows the day and Shah proves his mettle.
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Book: Sipahiki Swasni
Author: Mahesh Bikram Shah
Publisher: Bagar Foundation Nepal
Page:127
Price: Rs 150 (paperback)
(Published in The Himalayan Times of December 22, 2002.)